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Steven Ward
mystery writer

 

 

A Foreign Experience

Chapter 5 - Breakfast

 

Once safely behind the locked door of my suite, I donned my smoking jacket, lit another pipe, and threw myself into my chair to ponder this newest outrage. What struck me with the fullest force was the conviction that I was no victim of bizarre happenstance. There was an intelligence behind all that had occurred, I was now certain, and I resolved in that moment to expose whoever was responsible, before the voyage terminated. I made this pledge as the shadows of dusk gathered about me and, in the evening stillness, felt anew that curious fluttering sensation in my bosom which I believe I correctly identified as excitement.

I felt a burst of energy, both physical and intellectual and, spurred-on by this, sat at the desk which was positioned beneath the porthole to plan my strategy. I located Ships' paper in the desk-drawer, took out my pen and wrote the following, in bold strokes, across the top of the page:

"Where are my brogues?"

With these provocative words emblazoned before me, I undertook a process of deliberation. It seemed to me unlikely that the thief, having risked a great deal to obtain my shoes, would forthwith dispose of them, so I concluded that my brogues were still aboard. If, then, they remained in the possession of whoever had appropriated them, where might be the most effective place of concealment? The thief would doubtless surmise that my first action upon noticing my loss would be to report the theft to the ships' captain. He, in turn - given the seriousness of the offence - would initiate an immediate search of the ship which must lead to the discovery of the missing items, so the obvious places of concealment - wardrobe, suitcase etc - must be ruled out. So what would my clever thief do, I mused, what would he do...?

It was at this point that Fate, or that mysterious force to which I allude at the beginning of this narrative, took a hand. As I sat musing, my eye fell upon the leather-bound book resting on the night-stand by my bed. This was a collection of tales penned by the popular American author, Edgar Allen Poe, which I had made it my habit to peruse immediately before retiring each night. These were fanciful, some might even say grotesque, stories but they were undeniably thrilling and very cleverly conceived. Absently I reached across to pick up the volume and, resting its spine on the surface of the desk, allowed it to fall open as it may. When the pages stopped turning of their own volition, I peered closely to see which of the stories "chance" had selected. It was The Purloined Letter.

My heart missed a beat. I had read the story only the night before (would this explain why the book fell open so readily at this page?) and it came to my mind immediately; in short, this was the tale of a man who was in the possession of a stolen letter and, about to be discovered, wondered where in his rooms it might be safely hidden. His inspired solution was to place the letter with some others, in full view on his mantelpiece, adopting the principle that that which was on display had, by definition, no need of concealment. The brilliant ruse worked, and the parallel between that story and the situation in which I found myself was obvious - my thief would wear my shoes upon his own feet! The conclusion was inescapable. It followed, therefore, that the person I was seeking was a man of similar height and build to myself, and this of course narrowed the field considerably. I felt my pulse quicken with the excitement of the chase, but the hour was late and I decided that my best opportunity to unmask the thief would be the following morning when all the passengers would be at breakfast or, later, taking their post-breakfast stroll on the Summer Deck. In the meantime, so as not to arouse the suspicion of my persecutor, I would make the expected complaint to the Captain, and initiate the fruitless search.....



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